Something I really like about this entry is the fact that Mark didn't use ANY distortion. At all. Not even once!
With a contest geared towards inspiring the use of chords and riffs, I didn't think anyone would submit something clean. And, it's the first entry received! Still, everything fits very well!
There's even some chords used that step away from the key that the bass line is based in. This really helps sparks some interest in the song writing.
HEY!!! Does Your Rhythm SUCK!?